tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post8523620094033516892..comments2024-02-11T05:17:12.629-05:00Comments on L'ennui mélodieux: Re - cy - cling?Randal Graveshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08728992897551848531noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-7778851275288060802008-04-14T14:23:00.000-04:002008-04-14T14:23:00.000-04:00Quiet, Nunly! What would folks think if they lear...Quiet, Nunly! What would folks think if they learned I was consorting with a lady of the cloth? ;-)TomCathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11397335545286040472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-2733113761514432942008-04-12T15:13:00.000-04:002008-04-12T15:13:00.000-04:00Laugh? Uh, not a chance. other shit, maybe (and ...Laugh? Uh, not a chance. other shit, maybe (and thanks for that)<BR/><BR/>but....<BR/><BR/>'...fatigue of love...'<BR/><BR/>...it is a color I can embrace well.<BR/><BR/>three words, nice arrangement.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-21311543579990504492008-04-12T14:30:00.000-04:002008-04-12T14:30:00.000-04:00dcap, oh hell no, that's Freida Bee's shtick. I ju...dcap, oh hell no, that's Freida Bee's shtick. I just hope she gives me some tickets to all the fancy state functions.<BR/><BR/>SWB, merci, that's essentially what I was going for. <BR/><BR/>FB, merci aussi, but one can never completely articulate what one is feeling.<BR/><BR/>middle ditch, thanks! tomcat is definitely The Man when it comes to politics.Randal Graveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08728992897551848531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-60452519547051589232008-04-12T14:11:00.000-04:002008-04-12T14:11:00.000-04:00Congratulations with your E award from TomcatCongratulations with your E award from TomcatMiddle Ditchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16493665280732775898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-33482903447593875312008-04-12T13:11:00.000-04:002008-04-12T13:11:00.000-04:00No thing that I could write here would do that pie...No thing that I could write here would do that piece justice.<BR/><BR/>Its span is deeper than such notions though.Freida Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11489663202315694313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-75660837329760113902008-04-12T11:42:00.000-04:002008-04-12T11:42:00.000-04:00Impressive imagery indeed. Very dark and evocative...Impressive imagery indeed. Very dark and evocative. Inspires a sort of pleasant shivering.Blankhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10159463105401061130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-16951182873115114422008-04-12T11:22:00.000-04:002008-04-12T11:22:00.000-04:00are you the poet laureate?are you the poet laureate?Distributorcaphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10149154929149577121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-88882787579799967332008-04-12T11:05:00.000-04:002008-04-12T11:05:00.000-04:00okjimm, thanks and take whatever you wish, even ch...okjimm, thanks and take whatever you wish, even chuckles if it made you laugh.<BR/><BR/>candace, merci, but composing on the computer? Shudder. ;-)<BR/><BR/>fot, then I hope you don't read it when you're completely awake for you may hate it!<BR/><BR/>swinebread, thanks. I've never read those novels, are they good?<BR/><BR/>susan, merci. I like playing with sounds more than textbook meter, though Randal Graveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08728992897551848531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-1378624891015259252008-04-11T23:22:00.000-04:002008-04-11T23:22:00.000-04:00Some very sweet examples of creative alliteration....Some very sweet examples of creative alliteration. I especially liked:<BR/><BR/>"Souls ensorcelled in icy ritual<BR/>sacrifice fables for one serene breath."<BR/><BR/>Beautiful.susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16747450215034568033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-1879003704032424602008-04-11T23:18:00.000-04:002008-04-11T23:18:00.000-04:00I don't know why but your words made me think of T...I don't know why but your words made me think of Thomas Covenant, the Unbeliever... weird<BR/><BR/>somber but peaceful in a waySwinebreadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02947060321484913676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-10831390565754746192008-04-11T19:17:00.000-04:002008-04-11T19:17:00.000-04:00It may be because its really late here, but that w...It may be because its really late here, but that was very nice to read. The last poem part that is.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-51623600689341220062008-04-11T16:35:00.000-04:002008-04-11T16:35:00.000-04:00Nicely done, nicely done! You posey with emotion a...Nicely done, nicely done! You posey with emotion and grace.<BR/><BR/>I know you don't compose while on the PC, but some writers, before deleting any material, cut and paste the deletion into a file called "Dump." You never know when you might need that stuff later on.Candacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10488301409338243686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-75195067393861999892008-04-11T15:53:00.000-04:002008-04-11T15:53:00.000-04:00" lost moments buried permanence the fatigue of..." lost moments<BR/><BR/> buried<BR/> permanence <BR/><BR/>the fatigue of love "<BR/><BR/><BR/>I got dem condensed jmm bluz<BR/><BR/>can only appreciate poem-parts today. It was a good poem, I hope you don't mind if I just take the condensed part home.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-6847536711322753812008-04-11T14:42:00.000-04:002008-04-11T14:42:00.000-04:00dean, high praise, sir, thank you. But Katie Couri...dean, high praise, sir, thank you. But Katie Couric? Ouch!<BR/><BR/>ME, thanks, I (and my wine, muah) actually spent a bit of time on this so I'm glad you like it. Now get recycling, tree hugger.<BR/><BR/>tomcat, a great source because sometimes one is just stuck and you can't find the spark in the present.<BR/><BR/>ME, don't worry you always [redacted] when [redacted]. Hey, this is a fucking Randal Graveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08728992897551848531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-63327867538261113762008-04-11T14:34:00.000-04:002008-04-11T14:34:00.000-04:00tomcat- damn, I thought you said I was the one get...tomcat- damn, I thought you said <I>I</I> was the one getting your juices flowing! 8-OMary Ellenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07835150057881066641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-6330820463998412952008-04-11T14:27:00.000-04:002008-04-11T14:27:00.000-04:00I know the feeling. Sometimes I look over past ar...I know the feeling. Sometimes I look over past articles I've written to get the juices flowing again.TomCathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11397335545286040472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-89764487329384492182008-04-11T12:52:00.000-04:002008-04-11T12:52:00.000-04:00That poem is hauntingly beautiful. I think it's on...That poem is hauntingly beautiful. I think it's one of the best I've seen yet. <BR/><BR/><BR/><I>Woven lines<BR/>circumscribe all the lost moments buried<BR/>with permanence from the fatigue of love.</I><BR/><BR/>Amazing. <BR/><BR/>I'll go back to recycling my aluminum cans and paper now....Mary Ellenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07835150057881066641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-27100877910798473312008-04-11T12:50:00.000-04:002008-04-11T12:50:00.000-04:00Ok...testing...my comments won't go through. I'll ...Ok...testing...my comments won't go through. I'll try this first.Mary Ellenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07835150057881066641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3146715698090395935.post-13858333494102992792008-04-11T11:52:00.000-04:002008-04-11T11:52:00.000-04:00Wow. That is just amazing. Gonna make the Missus...Wow. That is just amazing. Gonna make the Missus read it tonight when I get home.<BR/><BR/>For some reason it brought Katie Couric to mind. Not sure why.Dean Wormerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06214049238722718299noreply@blogger.com